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Listening to a sad song, promised myself I'd stop,
On repeat, words thrown at me that sound so familiar,
Addicted to the sound, silence through my stereo.

Hate the words I'm hearing, but love the mood,
Bass playing, words that rhyme,
Keep changing my opinion of what everything means, every once in a while.

You lay down beside me, I hear you breathe,
Soft foot gently touching mine, the song starts again for the fifth time,
You turn over, but my eyes remain shut,

I slowly listen to the words,
                                                     But they're not about love.

Knock on the door, I shake you,
My heart’s racing, as the song plays again,
The words moving in fast-forward, nothing's going according to time.

                                         The paper has been scrunched,
                                                      Don't you see it shall never be perfect again?
©2007-2009 ~weathered182
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:iconliberato:
I like it. I feel like I can deeply relate, as most people (I imagine) can. Congrats for creating a piece so genuine to life in that respect.
:iconsuperclone:
very strong! i like it :)

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:iconleft-hand-path:
It looks like a passage out of my life really..
touches me in a way.. hard to explain
very well written
:iconweathered182:
Thanks
i think we all go through something like that :)
:iconthevesper:
This is well done... we've all been there.

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:iconinspirational-dreams:
Great job...

You've managed to make it flow all so well :D

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:iconweathered182:
ahh thx :)

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:iconmothersheart:
Not sure about this.
I can't find the meaning.

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:iconweathered182:
it's about a couple
who r trying tomake it work
the song is ametaphor for their relationship
hehehe
dunno if it works hhe

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